Talk:Henry Daglish/GA1
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
Picking up this one. Review to follow. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
- Lead:
- "the sixth premier of Western Australia" Not sourced in the article.
- " chief clerk in the WA Police Department." You haven't defined this abbreviation
- Early life:
- Premier of Western Australia
- Typo: "Councill" should be "Council"
- " the fourth youngest to this day" Suggest use of the {{As of}} template here
- "Governor" Link Governor of Western Australia
- "properties valued below £1,000" Consider using the {{inflation}} template
- "Companies and Mining legislation" Should this be capitalised?
- Source says "Companies and Mining legislation", so I decided to put the whole phrase in lowercase.
@Hawkeye7: That should be all. Steelkamp (talk) 05:25, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Looks good. Passing.
- Pass or Fail:
